Here is part of my story. Anna(soup);) helped me to write it.
On a hot sunny day, a cruise ship is heading for the Caribbean. On board is a young man named Chad. He has thick black hair and brown eyes. He is tall and muscular and has medium brown skin.
Chad just woke up from a long nap and climbed up to the deck. He strolled past James and Jenny sleeping on a bench. He heard a loud commotion on the other side of the ship. He rushed to investigate. Chad's mouth dropped open at what he saw.
To be continued.
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Good job, Ed! You made the story break at just the right point. :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's a good story Ed! I wonder what Chad saw? Was Puffy Head riding a shark? : ) Now you'll have to write a book : )
ReplyDeleteWhen you gonna have the rest?
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