"Now what" yelled Puffy Head, as he went to answer the door. "For the hundredth time" he said to himself.
"Can I have some more of your grasshopper soup?" wailed Felix.
"No No you big jerk, you just about ate all of it. I need some to you know!!" Puffy Head Yelled.
"I will go away if you just give me one more bite." cried Felix
"Yeah well that is what you said last time But you are a big pest so I will give you one more bite but that is all, OK?" Puffy Head shouted. So Felix got his bite and He ran off very happy. Or at last that is what Puffy Head thought. A minute later, Knock, knock knock. "You big fat jerk you said that you would go away, But you did not you big lier." Snorted Puffy Head. Well you will not get any more of my grasshopper soup!" Puffy Head yelled. "and I will beat you up until you cry. Ha Ha, So you better stop knocking on that door or you will be sorry!" laughed Puffy Head. Louder this time, Knock, knock knock, knock knock. "Well I warned you, You dumb idiot. so here I come." Puffy head stormed out of the kitchen (and away from his grasshopper soup) and went to open the door."Ha ha you dumb idiot I will beat you up until you cry and pull all of your feath " Puffy Head loud voice stopped immediately and he turned white as a sheet . Because it was not Felix at the door. It was the sheriff of bird town Arrow. Puffy Head's mouth opened but no noise came out. Finally after a long time some noise came out of his mouth, But all it was, was a err err err in a very scared and shaky voice. Puffy Head tried to close the door on Arrow but Arrow did not let him.
"Well" ,said Arrow, "You are a very mean rooster. You should know better then to say that you would pull out all my feathers beat me up." Arrow said in a very stern voice. "Well, do you want to go to jail?" Arrow said.
More to come!
Ok did I spell it all right? Does it make sense?
Monday, April 6, 2009
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Great story; what will happen next? Will Puffy Head go to jail? What will happen to the grasshopper soup?
ReplyDeleteYes, it makes sense.
You said, "You should no better..."; it should be "know". Great story!
Do you have the recipe for grasshopper soup?
Great job! Remember to start a new paragraph with each new speaker in your dialogue. That will make it easier to read. You did really good! :-)I wonder what will happen to Puffy Head??
ReplyDeletehmmmmmmmm, it must be a secret recipe that Puffy Head hides somewhere.Otherwise Felix would be making soup for himself : ) I guess Puffy Head will remember to be more careful next time when he feels like yelling at the door lol.Will He go to jail or will he be a good rooster and apologize?
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